Writing assessment

I have been learning to mark my own writing using a rubric.

Aunty Karla`s house

On Sunday morning I went to stay at my aunt's house and I had to sleep in my cousin's room and I was not happy because he would boss me around.  First we asked kullen´s mum if we could play on the playstation and she said yes and we were pleased.  So then we played gta5 and we played a race an we were having fun.  Next we played minecraft and we were playing with my sister jahnel and my brother kingston and we found some diamonds and we shared it to each other so we could make stuff and kill zombies and skeletons.  Then we played teachers an I was the principal and we had assembly and we had prizes an nettula breads and we always picked prize so we got bored then we played hide and seek and I always was the last one found and I always found my brother kingston.  After that we had dinner. It was boil up an it was delicious but I nearly threw up. Then we played more Minecraft but Kingston and Jahnel didn't want to play.  Finally we went to bed in my cousin´s room.

My writing score was 19. So I am a 2b writer.