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Thursday, June 25, 2020

Recount Writing: On Sunday

WALT use the correct structure and language in our writing.

On Sunday 

On Sunday me and my cousin rode our bikes to the dairy in town.
First I said, ¨Should we buy only two banana sprays for us.¨ Kullen said, ¨No, we need to buy enough banana sprays for all of us.¨
So we bought ten banana sprays. After that we went to Mac Donalds to get some food for our family.
Next my cousin texted his mum and dad to drive to town to help us with the Mcdonalds orders.
Then we rode back home because it was turning dark and we were not scared but luckily we had torches.
When we got home we went inside because it started to spit. The dinner was already on the table.
Dinner was yummy. It tasted like lots of burgers and lots of drink and chips in my mouth.
Finally we went to sleep in our warm snuggly and cozy bunk beds.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora My name is Jessy. My favourite part is when you went to sleep because you put a lot of poppy words.This reminded me of when I went to mac Donalds because it is so yummy.Next time, you could put in jusicy words.keep up the good work.

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  2. Kia ora Simon. I enjoyed your story because you had heaps of poppy words in it. I especially liked the part when you went to sleep. Keep up the good work. Blog you later.

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